William, I'm glad you completed all of the assignments. Now we need to work on improving the development of your responses. You make good points, but you've got to support it with evidence and commentary. Share your thoughts.
Cory - 2/5 Responses
Cory, I like the first sentence of your 2nd response. You've got to go deeper. How does the conflict affect the character? Do you know anyone who has been through similar conflicts? What does it say about human beings that these conflicts crop up?
Anthony - 1/5 Responses
Anthony, that was a pretty good response. You see the problem though. One response. Your effort needs to improve. Lollygag time is over.
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