This topic is interesting to me becaues I an already interested in Bwoling .When I was samll I went bwoling whis my mom and dad .It looked fun so i asand my mom if i can bwol went my fiand on saterdays moreing she sand yes .So now i an bwoling on two leangs. On Saterday i bwol at 11:00 AM to 1:00 PM then 3:00 PM to 5:00 PM and that is my Saterday.On Sunday i bwol at 1:00 PM to 3:00 PM for tevanl .
I already know this about my topic bwoling . I can already hold a 170 avegen . I can hit my tagict went i bwol . I already know how to cartrol my hook . I know that i can bwol a 256 game . I know I can bwol a 600 satand .I know it will take a leot of prasends .
How can I Inpovied my bwoling game to became a 200 avegen bwoler?
William Szczupak
Monday, April 14, 2008
Tuesday, February 26, 2008
blog response 1 -conflict
ive gotten pretty far in the novel "Missing Person" and now what im mostly looking forward to find out is if the main character Carrie ever finds her lost mother. I think later in the story her soccer games are going to clash with her searching for her mother and make it hard for her to continue searching. I think Carrie may become grumpy and stressed out later in the story though because of her tendency to panic easily, especially before soccer games.
blog response 3 - symbolism
I like the colors that the author chose for the cover. She chose blue for the main color. i thought she chose a nice tone of blue. I thought the design for the cover was very generic though. On the front cover there was a picture of a young woman with a shocked look on her face and next to it was a smaller picture of a mother and her younger daughter. I thought it was just a little cheesy and predictable since the title of the book is called "Missing Person", but it still got the job done anywaywhich was to sell the book.
blog response 4 - conflict
I personally think that the intro of the book im reading sucks. I think the author of "Missing Person", Sally Pfoutz, could of done a better job with the hook. When i first started reading it i wasnt hooked at all, i had to force myself to read the book(or i might have just been sleepy). But later in the story it became interesting because things that i could relate started popping up. One example being the main character Carrie is on a sports team, which i used to be, and has lost her mother, which i could relate to too. I think that if an author really wants to pull an audience in all they really have to do is say something that they can relate to.
Did the actions of the characters seem plausible? Why? Why not?
Janie, after hearing her parents explation of her being their granddaughter has a lot on her mind. She can't sleep. Lack of appitite , more dreams. She wakes up and instead of going to school, skips school with Reeve. They take a road trip to New Jersey. The place she may have been kidnapped from. She locks in a phone book and finds an address for the family who's missing their daughter. As she gets to the address, school bussses are dropping off kids. She sees a set of twins, with hair the same red as hers! Another older boy withe the same hair gets off another bus. She's over come withe memories.I think under the cir cumtances her actions are right on the money
William Szczupak
Janie, after hearing her parents explation of her being their granddaughter has a lot on her mind. She can't sleep. Lack of appitite , more dreams. She wakes up and instead of going to school, skips school with Reeve. They take a road trip to New Jersey. The place she may have been kidnapped from. She locks in a phone book and finds an address for the family who's missing their daughter. As she gets to the address, school bussses are dropping off kids. She sees a set of twins, with hair the same red as hers! Another older boy withe the same hair gets off another bus. She's over come withe memories.I think under the cir cumtances her actions are right on the money
William Szczupak
Monday, February 25, 2008
The Face on the Milk Carton, by Caroline B. Cooney pg. 87 -117
Do the characters read the way you think you would in a similar situation ? Do you find their actions troubling? Are their actions consistent with their characters? If not, perhaps ask yourself if it is resonable for anyone to be expected to act consistently in character?
Janie is barely sixteen . A normal sixteen year old worries about boys,driving ,their friends, proms the usual. Janie has a whole new issue. Since finding the milk carton with the the polka dot dress, she has memories, day mares as she calls them. So much stress its more than a child can handle. Was I really Kid napped? Way am I remembering things? people? Who really are my parents? She talks with her best friend. Her parents have answers but everything still doesn't add up. She feels so strange in her own life.
William Szczupak
Do the characters read the way you think you would in a similar situation ? Do you find their actions troubling? Are their actions consistent with their characters? If not, perhaps ask yourself if it is resonable for anyone to be expected to act consistently in character?
Janie is barely sixteen . A normal sixteen year old worries about boys,driving ,their friends, proms the usual. Janie has a whole new issue. Since finding the milk carton with the the polka dot dress, she has memories, day mares as she calls them. So much stress its more than a child can handle. Was I really Kid napped? Way am I remembering things? people? Who really are my parents? She talks with her best friend. Her parents have answers but everything still doesn't add up. She feels so strange in her own life.
William Szczupak
Sunday, February 24, 2008
The Face on the Milk Carton, Caroline B. Cooney pg. 47-87
As you read today, what surprised you? Explain how it changed you thinking about the stay
Janie's parents are confronted by her about a trunk she found in the attic .It contained school papers by a Hannah . Who's Hannah? Their answer for her is that Hannah was their daughter , making Janie their grand daughter . They tell a story , an emotional story . A story of how their sixteen year old got mixed up with the wrong people . A cult, hare Krishna . She joins the cult, disappears for years and shows up one day with a little girl. She wanted a better life for her daughter . The more Janie thinks about it, the more it don't make sense . Now her parents are looking guilty.
William Szczupak
As you read today, what surprised you? Explain how it changed you thinking about the stay
Janie's parents are confronted by her about a trunk she found in the attic .It contained school papers by a Hannah . Who's Hannah? Their answer for her is that Hannah was their daughter , making Janie their grand daughter . They tell a story , an emotional story . A story of how their sixteen year old got mixed up with the wrong people . A cult, hare Krishna . She joins the cult, disappears for years and shows up one day with a little girl. She wanted a better life for her daughter . The more Janie thinks about it, the more it don't make sense . Now her parents are looking guilty.
William Szczupak
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